Shared Routine

Eli’s alarm went off just a few moments after her neighbor’s, living beside her.  Slow but then quickly the strong beat hit against her wooden desk and pleaded she get up quickly and urgently as well.

The two different routines hit one another head on.  This was one of the things Eli liked about New York, since moving here ten months ago, how while within your routine someone else’s routine would play with your own.

This entry was published on November 4, 2013 at 7:37 pm and is filed under Fiction Writing by Jessie. Bookmark the permalink. Follow any comments here with the RSS feed for this post.

2 thoughts on “Shared Routine

  1. Diane on said:

    It was great but I think you should add more to the shared routine if that’s what it’s called but I read most of your stories and they were really good. You r a GREAT writer, and I am very inspired by u!

    -Leora Safer

  2. Diane on said:

    U do great stories!!!!

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